Friday, July 6, 2007

St. Croix Fishing





Some spec work that I did with Chris Neil. Let me kniw what you think.

4 comments:

theryanburk said...

I like them. My favorite line is the one about surroundings. I'm going to steal 'em when I'm asked to write for Rapala at Pocket. Thanks, buddy.

americanmidwestsamurai said...

Last line has powers comprable to Wonder Boy.

R. Falch said...

I think the second one should break after "A rod extra sensitive" just because it reads easier.

I know why it is set up like it is, but right now I sort of fumble over it the first couple times.

Nice work.

lee said...

I think they're fucking sweet.